Monday, March 4, 2013

TOEFL Essay

19. Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.


                Silom road, one of the busiest streets in Bangkok, may give chills to office workers when the name is heard. Why? It’s disastrous. During rush hours, the traffic jam is egregious. Cars stay in place without moving for hours. Horns honk furiously at each other. Statuses posted on Twitter and Facebook how bad the traffic is. What did you expect? It’s Bangkok! For some reason the notorious demagogues handed first car policy in which owners that never purchased a car will have lower prices than the ones that did. As a result, the number of cars increased dramatically. Because of that, people began to question the government that why don’t they improve public transportation instead of creating highways or giving out new policies that will just cause problems? Improving roads and highways will just result in a higher number of cars. And once again, it will cause problems.
                One of the very first problems that will result after the improvements in highways/roads is pollution. With many cars travelling on highways and roads, carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide are released from them into the atmosphere. These gasses create the greenhouse effect. And with that, the city will become much hotter and hotter.  When the city becomes much hotter, people rely more on air conditioners. The air conditioners also use more electricity. Electricity requires more energy. Therefore, coals are being burned, causing pollutions again. It’s like a cycle. And also, the ashes from the burnt coals float all around. The area around where the coal is being processed into electricity is not immaculate. Again, causing pollution. So this is another reason why we should not improve highway or roads.
                The second reason why government should improve public transportation is because there would be fewer accidents. Why? Most accidents that happen in Bangkok are mostly motorcycles and car crashes. It is often caused when people are trying to outpace the vehicle in front, and they can’t break their vehicle in time. Why do they have to outpace the vehicle in front? Well because there’s so many cars and humans have limited patience. So we want to go faster. That’s why it causes vehicle crashes. But on the other hand, using public transportation like BTS and MRT will reduce road accidents. There won’t be anything to outpace. There won’t be anything to crash into (well, of course except for train crash). With less accidents, less people get hurt. And that’s a good thing for Thai residents.
                Lastly, convenience and connections. When Thailand’s subway is being compared to other Asian countries, it’s really pitiful. Sometimes I felt taunted when I go to Hong Kong and feel the fantastic subway connections. Every subway station can walk to a place. The underground is totally connected with subways. The convenience make it possible for every Hong Kong resident to go around without paying much. It also improves quality life too. People get to walk every day , so therefore people tend to have better health too, not sallow looking. On the other hand, sitting in a car would gain you nothing except for the building up of fats.
                In conclusion, improved public transportation is a better idea than improving highways and roads. Developed countries tend to develop a more organized and variety of public transportation. There are more pros than cons for public transportation as on the previous paragraphs. Improved public transportations would most likely be the answer to solve the boring traffics in Bangkok. So, improved highways and roads are no better than a well-improved public transportation.
                

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